April 12, 2024 Delightfully Difficult Dactyls, Part II “Emily Dickinson” by Wendy Cope, and the Challenge of Writing in Dactylic Meter in English

Winter 2023 Issue of Rattle

Early this year, a poet friend kindly passed along a recent issue of a fine poetry journal, Rattle. My surprising-even-to-me rush of interest in the dactylic meter came on the heels of reading the conversation section, highlighting the ideas of poet Annie Finch. From the Rattle website:

“The conversation section explores the intersection of meter and magic with “Poetry Witch” Annie Finch. Annie’s mission is to restore our interest in all five meters, beyond the standard iambics, while reconnecting our spirits to the body and the earth. We talk about it all in a fascinating discussion about the deep history of poetry and humanity.”

Since reading this conversation, I have realized how iambic I am, for the most part. My own first name, LES-lie, is trochaic, the reverse of the I-amb in terms of accent (or “stress”). I tend to think of trochees as the photographic negatives of iambs. But those trilling three-foot meters, dactyls and anapests, rarely caught my attention. (An anapest consists of the same kind of reversal of the stress pattern of the dactyl.)

Now that they have I am seeing how it is difficult for me to actually use this metrical form, or even to find modern examples of it in action.

Here is one fine illustration from John Hollander’s classic handbook, Rhyme’s Reason: A Guide to English Verse (Yale University Press, 1981)

"Dactyl" means / "finger" in / Greek, and a / foot that was / made up of / one long

Syllable followed by two, like the joints in a finger was used for

Lines made of six, just like these, in the epics of Homer and Virgil,

Save that in English we substitute downbeats and upbeats for long-short.

*

In an an / apest up / beats start out/ in reverse
of the dactyl's persuasion but end up no worse.
(Yes, the anapest's name is dactylic--a curse?)

Paul Fussell‘s splendid magisterial treatise, Poetic Meter and Poetic Form (Random House, 1965; 1979) begins with an enlightening essay on “The Nature of Meter.” In it, he opens with a quote from Ezra Pound, “Rhythm must have meaning,” and later asserts, “…triple meters (based on anapestic or dactylic feet) seem inevitably to have something vaguely joyous, comical, light, or superficial about them.”

Lines of anapests, while not exactly common or even considered contemporary, are less thin on the ground than lines built of dactyls. Think of limericks, or of that classic, “‘The Night Before Christmas,” by Clement Clarke Moore, or even of Edgar Allen Poe’s “Annabel Lee.”

I am sure there must be modern dactylic poems of which I am unaware. (If you know of any, please share them with me!) In my hunt for them, I have turned up one that I just love. It’s by Wendy Cope, a brilliant British poet whose first book, Making Cocoa for Kingsley Amis, appeared in 1986. Her collection, Family Values, has a permanent place on my shelves. Cope is able consistently to craft poems that seem light but are never light-weight, rather the way an aerialist skips across a tightrope, making something very difficult appear easy to do. Cope uses a variety of metrical forms. Here is my favorite of hers in dactylic dimeter.

Emily Dickinson

Higgledy-piggledy
Emily Dickinson
Liked to use dashes
Instead of full stops.

Nowadays, faced with such
Idiosyncrasy,
Critics and editors
Send for the cops.

~ Wendy Cope
Wendy Cope (Photo by Stevie McGarrity Alderdice)

One of the things I love about this poem is how it made me notice that both “Emily” and “Dickinson” are perfect dactyls.

For now, my fingers have not managed to bring more than a single line or two of dactylic verse to the page. If I ever manage a whole poem, I shall share it here. I am hopeful that memorizing the opening to Longfellow’s “Evangeline” will work some kind of subterranean magic.

Meanwhile, waiting for the Muse, I mull…perhaps I can do something with the double trochees in “Pterodactyl”?

Wishing you a whimsical day,

LESLIE

April 11, 2024 Delightfully Difficult Dactyls, Part I: Considering Longfellow’s “Evangeline”

AT-mos-sphere

Yesterday, a friend’s question reminded me of the classic epic poem by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow: “Evangeline: A Tale of Acadie.”

CAN-dle-light

Longfellow is a poet of great accomplishment. His works, once wildly popular, enabled him to support his large family. Though rarely read today, his poetic achievements still reverberate, nonetheless, in popular culture. Robbie Robertson of The Band wrote and recorded two songs inspired by “Evangeline.” Sung by Emmylou Harris, with The Band, in The Last Waltz, “Evangeline,” recounts the basic plot of Longfellow’s poem in summary form. Another song, The Band’s “Acadian Driftwood,” expands the poetic license originally taken by Longfellow in expounding upon the history of how the Acadian people were forceably driven (between 1755-63) from Nova Scotia, during “Le Grand Derangement.” Years later, some of these refugees arrived in the countryside of what is now Louisiana. Here, the French-speaking, Catholic Acadians created the distinctive Cajun culture. (A tour of Louisiana yields many instances of Evangeline as a place name–from a whole parish to a dormitory on the LSU campus. In a few places, sculptures of Evangeline can be found.)

(In Minnesota, where Longfellow set the action of a subsequent epic, rendered in another rare-in-English form, trochaic trimeter, “The Song of Hiwatha,” we have a replica of Longfellow’s house, built in the early 1900s by an admirer, Robert “Fish” Jones. It stands in Minneapolis, near the top of Minnehaha Falls. I have never managed to visit–it is often closed–but perhaps this summer I shall be successful. If not, I can hike down and look up to see the slender but stunning cascade.)

CUM-u-lus

My own mind is filled with iambs, that two-part poetic “foot” so common in English, said to mimic the heartbeat: da-DUM. I love it. Still, I am curious about what I might learn from studying the dactylic form, the three-part poetic “foot” more common in Greek and Latin than in English. (As many of you know, the name of this meter comes from the Greek word for “finger.”) It goes DUM-da-da (or as I think of it, recalling Ballroom Dance lessons, “Long-short-short.” This is the structure of a human finger, considered from the palm to fingertip.

In recent months, I have making lists of words and phrases that hold this dactylic arrangement of stresses. (See photo captions above.) Yesterday, I committed to memorizing the Prelude–the first 19 lines–of “Evangeline” and to reading over the next few weeks or months–yes, aloud!–all five archaic-sounding Cantos of the poem. I don’t know whether I shall ever be able to write a stanza in dactylic hexameters (lines that contain six more-or-less dactylic feet) but I know I will have a lot of fun trying.

Who knows? I might even move on to “The Song of Hiawatha” and the challenge of trochaic trimeter!

Tomorrow, a bit more on the modern use of dactylic meter.

LESLIE

April 10, 2024 Announcing a Poetry Reading on 7:00 p.m. Tuesday, May 7, 2024 at the Northfield Public Library–I Will Read with Poet Scott Lowery

A big thank-you to Tyler Gardner of the Northfield Public Library for constructing this banner, and to Raymonde Noer for my author photo!

One of the best things about having other poets as friends is that when they publish books filled with thoughtful, insightful, musical poems you can be delighted for them. I met Scott Lowery many years ago in his then-home city of Winona. It was the Maria W. Faust Sonnet Competition that brought us together. We both have had winning entries. Scott’s work–whether in traditional forms, like sonnets, or in more organic shapes–is truly stand-out. I am delighted that he arranged for a reading to showcase Mutual Life (Finishing Line Press, 2023) here in Northfield so that you can meet him, too.

Scott’s work is topical yet timeless. Each of the twenty-three poems in his new collection shimmers with specific observation and language that manages to be at once flinty, spare, and distilled, yet also lush,  filled with melody, and extravagantly memorable. Taken together, these poems ponder how humans struggle through turbulent times, awash with keen (but often unarticulated) hungers for individual relevance and connection. This collection invites us to broaden our humanity, to look up and out, as well as deep within.

In addition to a selection of poems from Mutual Life, Scott will also share some of the poems in his award-winning collection, Empty-Handed, originally published in 2013 and recently reissued by its publisher, Northfield’s own Red Dragonfly Press. In fact, Scott’s idea is to make the event a little more “Northfield.” Scott and I realized that our work shares some key themes, including hometown life, a Minnesota sense of place, inspiration from the art of others, climate anxieity, and the lessons gained from family. When he asked me to share the podium for this event, we saw an opportunity for a reading in which our poems might have a kind of conversation with each other. It will be an experiment for us, and it is one I am looking forward to!

I hope that you can join us on Tuesday, May 7 to meet Scott and hear him read his wonderful poems. LESLIE

April 9, 2024 Writing Poems for Fictional Characters, Part Two

Many thanks to those readers who took the time to wrestle with my question about whose (fictional) poetic voice shone through the hatchling poems for fictive characters that I shared on April 6. I truly appreciate your help–you know who you are!

It helped me to get your thoughtful responses. One such response, from a very accomplished writer of fiction, I will share here, since she shared it publically in the Comments Field:

“The age of a poet is always young. The place from which a poet creates can exist in all ages. I can’t discern the work of an elderly artist of any genre except maybe in skill and sophistication, both of which I see and read here. I wouldn’t have said “This is Leslie Schultz’s work” if you hadn’t told me it was, but knowing, I recognize your mind and heart and intellect in the compact poems packed with internal rhyme and evocative imagery. Which isn’t to say you can’t/didn’t write in other voices. If we can create characters, we can think and write and feel in their experiences, however close to or foreign from our own (if anything is).” Jan Newman

As to the fictive authorship of the six shared poems?

Older Poet?
Younger Poet?

“Study of Cloud Rapture from the Shore” Older Poet

“Jenny Stubtoe” Younger Poet

“Candlelight at Point Reyes” Older Poet

“My First Shasta Soda” Younger Poet

“The Geode” Younger Poet

“White Egret, Green Field” Older Poet

Wishing you clear directions for your own day’s journey, wherever and however you are headed–LESLIE

April 8, 2024 Eclipse Thoughts

Garden Sunflower, 2021

What kind of event is it when a solar eclipse is, itself, eclipsed by cloud and rain? That is our situation here today. Elsewhere in the world, people are gathered for the rare show of the Moon passing in front of the Sun, a stately and celestial pas-de-deux.

To mark the occasion, I am publishing a poem that has not yet, I think, seen the light of day, but it was inspired by the solar eclipses in 2013, and by the Northfield Sidewalk Poetry competition held that year.

Is the Moon afraid
of its dark side?
Is the Sun proud 
of its flare?
Can I accept
my whole, wild heart
when it holds 
too much to bear?

Leslie Schultz

(I submitted three poems that year, including this one, and a different one–a celebration of pollination–was chosen, which can be seen below.)

Last week, I spotted this (below) posted in the Northfield Public Library–always a place for community and timely programming! Of course, wherever you are, when you look up into the sky, do protect your eyes from direct views into the sun.

May you see something rare today!

LESLIE